PINLYX - 100 SUBJECT LINES ============================= Organised by sequence stage. These are patterns, not guarantees: no open-rate figures are quoted here because your list, your domain reputation and your industry decide the number, not the wording. How to use: pick two from the same block, run them 50/50 as an A/B on step 1, and decide after at least 200 sends per variant. Merge fields: {{first_name}} {{company}} {{topic}} {{pain_point}} {{event}} -- OPENERS: QUESTION (1-15) -------------------------------------------------- 1. {{first_name}}, quick question about {{topic}} 2. How does {{company}} handle {{pain_point}}? 3. {{first_name}} - who owns {{topic}} at {{company}}? 4. Is {{topic}} on the list this quarter? 5. {{company}} + {{topic}}? 6. Worth asking: {{pain_point}}? 7. {{first_name}}, are you the right person for this? 8. Still doing {{topic}} manually? 9. What is {{company}} using for {{topic}}? 10. {{first_name}}, is this a priority yet? 11. Quick one on {{pain_point}} 12. Does this land with you, {{first_name}}? 13. {{topic}} at {{company}} - who should I ask? 14. Are you the {{topic}} person? 15. {{first_name}}, one question -- OPENERS: OBSERVATION (16-30) ---------------------------------------------- 16. Saw your post on {{topic}} 17. {{company}}'s approach to {{topic}} 18. Noticed {{company}} is hiring {{role}} 19. Congratulations on {{event}} 20. {{first_name}}, saw this and thought of {{company}} 21. Your {{topic}} setup 22. Something I noticed about {{company}} 23. {{event}} - nice work 24. Following {{company}} since {{event}} 25. {{first_name}}, about your {{topic}} post 26. This reminded me of {{company}} 27. Spotted {{company}} in {{topic}} 28. What you said about {{pain_point}} 29. {{company}} and the {{topic}} problem 30. Your take on {{topic}} -- OPENERS: DIRECT (31-45) --------------------------------------------------- 31. {{pain_point}}, solved 32. Cold email, honest ask 33. {{first_name}} - 30 seconds 34. Straight to it: {{topic}} 35. This is a sales email 36. Two lines about {{pain_point}} 37. {{company}} could save [N] hours a week 38. The {{topic}} thing 39. No pitch, one idea 40. {{first_name}}, worth 30 seconds? 41. About {{pain_point}} at {{company}} 42. One idea for {{company}} 43. {{topic}} without the manual part 44. Short one, {{first_name}} 45. Skip this if {{topic}} is handled -- NUDGES (46-60) ------------------------------------------------------------ 46. Re: {{previous_subject}} 47. Bumping this 48. Did this get buried? 49. {{first_name}}? 50. Following up on {{topic}} 51. Still relevant? 52. Quick nudge 53. Any thoughts, {{first_name}}? 54. Top of your inbox 55. Circling back 56. One more try on {{topic}} 57. Worth a reply? 58. Did I lose you? 59. Checking in on {{topic}} 60. {{first_name}}, still there? -- VALUE (61-75) ------------------------------------------------------------- 61. What usually goes wrong with {{topic}} 62. Three things teams get wrong about {{pain_point}} 63. A number you might find useful 64. How [similar company] handles {{topic}} 65. The {{topic}} mistake nobody talks about 66. No ask, just this 67. Something useful about {{pain_point}} 68. Why {{topic}} projects stall 69. What we learned about {{pain_point}} 70. The part of {{topic}} nobody budgets for 71. A shortcut for {{pain_point}} 72. Worth knowing before you buy anything 73. {{topic}}: the honest version 74. What I would do in your position 75. Free, no strings: {{topic}} -- ASKS (76-88) -------------------------------------------------------------- 76. 15 minutes, {{first_name}}? 77. Tuesday or Thursday? 78. Worth a quick call? 79. Can I show you? 80. {{first_name}}, grab a slot? 81. Quicker to show than write 82. 15 minutes this week 83. Demo, or a 3-minute video? 84. Shall we talk? 85. Open to a call, {{first_name}}? 86. Book a time that suits 87. Coffee call? 88. Want to see it? -- BREAKUPS AND RE-ENGAGEMENT (89-100) --------------------------------------- 89. Closing the loop 90. Last one from me 91. Should I stop here? 92. Wrong time? 93. Closing your file 94. Permission to stop 95. {{first_name}}, one final note 96. It has been a while 97. New quarter, new priorities? 98. Reviving an old thread 99. {{topic}} ever get solved? 100. Worth another look? -- WHAT ACTUALLY MOVES THE NUMBER -------------------------------------------- The subject line is the smallest lever you have. In order of impact: 1. Authentication (SPF, DKIM, DMARC) and domain reputation 2. List quality - are these people who could plausibly want this? 3. The first line of the body, which previews next to the subject 4. Sending in the recipient's working hours 5. The subject line itself Fix them in that order.