PINLYX - 12 TELEGRAM OPENERS =============================== Spintax already wired up. Paste into Templates > New, one per template. Merge fields: {first_name} {company} {group_name} {channel_topic} {topic} Rules these follow, and yours should too: - Under 30 words. A long first DM is deleted unread. - One question, at the end. - A real, specific reason for messaging in the first clause. - No link in the first message, ever. 1. GROUP CONTEXT {Hi|Hey} {first_name}, {saw|noticed} your {post|message} in {group_name} about {channel_topic}. {How are you handling|What are you using for} that {now|at the moment}? 2. SHARED GROUP, SOFTER {Hi|Hey} {first_name} - {we are both in|saw you in} {group_name}. {Quick question|One question} about {channel_topic} if you have a minute? 3. COMPANY OBSERVATION {Hi|Hey} {first_name}, {noticed|saw} {company} {is|has been} {working on|doing a lot with} {topic}. {Curious|Wondering} how you {handle|manage} it {today| right now}? 4. DIRECT AND HONEST {Hi|Hey} {first_name} - cold message, {I will keep it short|so I will be brief}. {We help|We work with} teams {like|similar to} {company} {with|on} {topic}. {Relevant to you?|Worth a look?} 5. QUESTION FIRST {Hi|Hey} {first_name}, {how does|how do} {company} {currently handle|deal with} {topic}? {Asking because|Reason I ask:} {we just built something for it|it is what we work on}. 6. MUTUAL GROUND {Hi|Hey} {first_name}, {we both follow|we are both in} {group_name}. {Your point about|What you said about} {channel_topic} {landed|stuck with me}. {Can I ask you something?|Mind if I ask a question?} 7. SPECIFIC PRAISE {Hi|Hey} {first_name} - {that point|the thing you said} about {channel_topic} {was|is} {right|spot on}. {Do you|Does {company}} {run into|hit} {topic} {as well|too}? 8. LOW COMMITMENT {Hi|Hey} {first_name}, {no pitch|not selling anything} - {genuinely curious| honestly just curious} how {company} {approaches|handles} {topic}. {Two minutes?|Happy to trade notes.} 9. PROBLEM FIRST {Hi|Hey} {first_name}, {most|a lot of} teams {your size|like yours} {struggle with|lose time to} {topic}. {Is that|Does that sound} {familiar|true for you}? 10. TRADE {Hi|Hey} {first_name}, {happy to|glad to} {share|send} {what we learned about| our notes on} {topic} {if useful|if that helps}. {Want them?|Shall I send it?} 11. TIMING {Hi|Hey} {first_name}, {is|would} {topic} {something you are looking at|on the list} {this quarter|right now}? {If not, no problem|Happy to circle back later}. 12. REFERRAL SHAPE {Hi|Hey} {first_name} - {someone in|a few people in} {group_name} {mentioned| said} {company} {was|might be} {looking at|working on} {topic}. {True?|Is that right?} -- WHAT BREAKS THESE --------------------------------------------------------- - Sending all twelve from one account in one day. Rotate across senders. - Leaving {group_name} unfilled. An empty merge field is the loudest possible signal that this is automated. - Adding a link. First message, no link. Every time. - Following up more than twice. Two follow-ups, then stop.